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snorgar, 12 Dec 2007 10:15 am
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I think this page came out better. It is the first page I got to use my tablet on. Once I get the hang of it I hope to be able to do better pages.
Tell me what you think =)
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Darkie-sama, 12 Dec 2007 11:03 am
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Looks pretty good, but the dialogue is a bit hard to read at times. Also it looks a bit flat.
On the other hand, Draven got a nice mark on his cheek. *snerk*
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snorgar, 12 Dec 2007 11:30 am
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I assume you mean "flat" as in its 3d feel. Now that you mention it In the last panel it is hard to tell hes in the fron't shes in the back. I will need to work on ways to fix that.
Practice makes perfect. Should use bigger font to. This one I already knew but I needed room for the text so I went 2 points down from normal size. I will be sure to fix that as well.
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manga333666, 12 Dec 2007 06:56 pm
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it es gud! sorry...it is AWESOME
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CPD, 12 Dec 2007 07:39 pm
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This page made me laugh.
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Nezumi-Neko, 08 Jan 2008 04:17 pm
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very funny
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